Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Sandy Onshore Comments

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heart seems to assimilate being in unison
sun when caresses earth to resonate
warmth dissipates all through space
gravity is law of attraction diffuses into unity
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Dr subhendu kar
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Sandra Feldman 29 September 2012

Very, very curious verse construction, but I like it, will have to read several times to get true impact, . I think you are an unusual poet Dr. Kar

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Anita Sehgal 19 September 2012

; ; we just stand to stare in midst of crest and trough when tide to kiss by thirst of sandy onshore; ; lovely lines

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Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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