Saturday, March 28, 2009

Sandy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sandy found a boy to love,
The captain of the team.
Her mother said she didn't like
The boy she thought a dream.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Cristy Upshaw 09 June 2009

hearing your voice with each word I read. something I did several times, bcz I couldn't get enough of hearing them. exquisite write and all yours are.

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Ency Bearis 11 April 2009

A very nice romantic story. I like the rhymes and the flow nice to read..

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Ernestine Northover 06 April 2009

The trials and tribulations of life, haven't we all gone through them! We all have to learn the hard way, at some time or other. Great write. Great storyline. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Meggie Gultiano 05 April 2009

two generations..and it's all about love..you are a good story teller..

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Catrina Heart 04 April 2009

Sandy! Oh! Sandy! You are a history Of love and romance Songs of one's heart............ You reminded me of the song Sandy Wolfey! Great descriptive poem written in a fine poetic structure..................10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 31 March 2009

It seems history (of love) does not repeat itself. Theory of mutation works after all.

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Madison Yeater 30 March 2009

thank you for sharing. it brings about a lot of memories i had with my mother..

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Susan Bagley 29 March 2009

Very heartwarming indeed. I expected a sad ending and am delighted to find a new begining for both Mother and Daughter. Nicely done indeed. Susan

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Duh Huh 29 March 2009

Ah love, it makes the world go round. As always, you come through with a well thought out poem. I like the ending being the beginning as it is with life and love sometimes. One chapter ends and another begins. As always, thank you for sharing and am looking forward to more more more :)

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this thing reads so good.. perfect meter/ and lucky boy that got Sandy's love

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a lovely story told for two generatrions..really good

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Chiffon Ruffles 28 March 2009

How lovely is this story? ...you have such talent with words....Chiffie

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Every generation needs to learn their own lessons and we all go through the same phases-ever read Shakespeares The Seven Stages Of Man? Life repeats itself.....

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