Sandwich Comments

Ever so powerful and moving! .. Very creatively and touchingly expressed! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

Sandwiched between words I tasted the creamy pain You say these are flavors of life But it pierced my heart like knife....well penned! (10)

Sometimes life and circumstances serves us some unsavory dishes that we are forced to swallow. A very original, well written and touching work. All falls into place. Your poetic sandwich, a success.

Never thought of sandwich in such a poetic way! Beautiful poem!

Sandwiched between words I tasted the creamy pain You say these are flavors of life But it pierced my heart like knife You added a little sause of love And sprinkled freshly ground pepper You say its hot and sweet stir But it filled my eyes with tears - - - So poetically expressed ! !

It is a nice metaphorical poem on pain having sandwich of words. Fantastic expression.10

A little sauce of love...

This is a very thought provoking poem about sandwich.