Friday, September 30, 2011

Sandstorm Comments

Rating: 4.8

She ponders the fidelity
Of the stars and the moon.
And she comes to me
Like an angry sandstorm
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Stefanie Fontker
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Stan Petrovich 01 October 2011

I agree with S. Mcdonald. Expand and conquer.

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Sean Mcdonald 30 September 2011

I really like it, there's something powerful there. Another verse would be wonderful.

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