Sunday, February 24, 2008

Sands Of Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Written for a Poetry Challenge. The challenge was to write a poem including sand dunes without mentioning either word, this was the result.

Take the train to Bodmin Road
They call it Parkway now
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Res John Burman
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Mary Gordley 27 February 2008

You were most certainly up to the challenge. I am very impressed with how you managed to bring those forbiden words into play without ever having to use them.

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Craig Anderson 24 February 2008

It was like being taken by the hand through an oil painting of prose. Stunningly beautiful in it's descriptive Res. Best Regards. Craig. P.S And how is Rick Stein...?

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