Thursday, December 6, 2007

Sands Of Time Comments

Rating: 3.5

The sands of time
So precious, each grain
The past eroded
Like the earth from the rain
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Lillian Jamison
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Al Ramos 03 March 2008

The simple truth is worth a ton of sand. Nice poem, keep writing

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Ernestine Northover 21 February 2008

That ticking away of time, I try not to think of it too much, especially when you get to my age. Nicely expressed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Marvin Brato 06 December 2007

And remember to enjoy life, it is not a race. Leave each day as if its your last! , Thanks for sharing, a 10.

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Thad Wilk 06 December 2007

A really nice write Lillian, savor the simple pleasures. Pleasure to read! *10*! ! ! Thad

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