Tuesday, February 7, 2017

Sands Of Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

A broken up tarmac, desolate road
Borders with buildings, which silently erode
Tumbleweeds play, the trees slowly die
This is a town that has now said goodbye
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Tammy Nicholls
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Siddartha Montik 19 February 2017

Wonderful an observation and all on Nature around. The flow is flawless and loved it reading! ! thank you Poet!

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Jeremy Horsford 18 February 2017

Great flow throughout and a lovely ending. You definitely have skill. Although it might be worth reading your other poems to confirm that.

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Lawerence Mize 17 February 2017

Enjoy the ebb and flow of your poems. Good one.

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Sister Frances 07 February 2017

This poem is really awesome, keep sharing :)

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