Sands Of Time Comments

'We walk along the sands of time your fingers are entwined with mine the moonlight shone upon your face as we slowly turn into embrace.' loved this, I am always a sucker for 'sands of time' poems, holding hands in moonlight and ah I had better stop here, it is a family site right :)

Brilliant poem and so beautiful.

Memories! ! With the taste of you still on my lips! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Beautiful scene and a terrific rhythm which catch the tender mood perfectly. This has to go in my favourites' list, Annette.

oops! i MISSED this typo until the computer pointed it out to me! ! overwheleming desire is rising...........overwhelming [only two es] bri :)

AA, thanks for this. it shall go asap into Section C of November's 'a showcase for PH poets'. and to MyPoemList. and, with your permission, already granted by you, i shall change entwinded to entwined. :) favorite lines: The taste of you still on my lips the scent of you upon my skin overwheleming desire is rising fire in us is re-igniting..................that.....is.....HOT! bri :)