Saturday, October 29, 2016

Sands Bethlehem Comments

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Bethlehem, I just arrived at this town.
With its name in big letters, a hotel is waiting for me.
This is the first time I come here.
Now it's mid-Autumn, trees wear their green and yellow colors.
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Dung Nguyen 29 October 2016

Thank you for sharing your new poem, Sands Bethlehem. It is very interesting! Big and small buildings emerge out of green and yellow trees! Beautiful picture of Autumn season! Good work.

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