Wednesday, February 21, 2007

Sandman Comments

Rating: 3.0

Did you notice that shadow at night?
That moved like a wraith at the edge of your sight.
That melted away as you turned on the light.
That my love was me
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Maya Crisol 30 March 2007

I loved it! ! ! Beautiful!

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Francesca Johnson 21 February 2007

In my opinion that first stanza stands on it's own. The poem then got darker and darker. I didn't like the last stanza but it had to be there to complete this unique piece. Love, Fran xx

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