Wednesday, January 13, 2010

Sandman. Comments

Rating: 5.0

You can’t ever imprison me
Through closed eyes you won’t ever see
I lurk within your mind’s despair
Whilst you sleep soundly on your chair.
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J.A McManus
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Wow! I've never thought of the sandman as evil, but I absolutely how you've portrayed him! Your poem flows so well and it is beautifully rhymed! The 2nd and 4th stanzas are my favorites! Those lines in particular remind me of a nightmare. I just-I love it! I can't wait to add it to my favorites! Truly wonderful job!

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J.A McManus

J.A McManus

Carlisle, Cumbria
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