Wednesday, October 26, 2005

Sandcastles Comments

Rating: ★3.5

I made a castle in the sand
It looked like you
The sun dried it
And it crumbled
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Lucy Burrow
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Marina Gipps 05 March 2006

i like this one. i can relate to the poem's vehicle.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 November 2005

True. Life is like that. It is a lesson to everyone. One should not build air castles or sand castles.

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Ernestine Northover 26 October 2005

Perhaps it would last better with a bit of cement added. Sincerely Ernestine

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Lucy Burrow

Lucy Burrow

Nigeria, West Africa
Lucy Burrow
Lucy Burrow
Nigeria, West Africa
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