Sunday, June 28, 2009

Sandcastles Comments

Rating: 5.0

This boy is making sandcastles
that tower over his head.
Great golden piles of joy
an imaginery empire created.
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Emmanuel Stone
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Some Body 05 October 2009

That was a great peice, made my think just how fragile life is, thanks.

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Linda Ori 28 August 2009

Wonderfully descriptive piece of writing. Great imagery, and also a great introspective understanding of the fragile nature of our lives and how easily they can tumble and be washed away, leaving us to the mercy of our own instincts to survive. Great read! Linda

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