Sunday, November 23, 2008

Sandcastle Comments

Rating: 5.0

We lived in a world made of sand
Our castles built under moonlight
They stood tall and they stood grand
Beacons of hope filled the night.
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Colm Hayes
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Matt Mooney 12 December 2010

A lovely metaphorical, flowing piece of poetry.The opening lines are brilliant.10.

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Viola Grey 23 November 2008

what a wonderful piece....it seems mean to sit here and love this when it has so much sadness in it....but you have written this piece so well.

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Colm Hayes

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