Wednesday, May 20, 2009

++sand Papers++ Comments

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With coarse grain of envy and theft
Spotted across its surface
To let you fall
If evil thinkers scratch your heart
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Fasika Ayalew
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C. P. Sharma 22 February 2010

Wisdom peeps through your poem. Pricks of life are sand papers that rub off its dirt and dust. CP

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Kesav Easwaran 22 May 2009

Beautiful write, Fasika...truthful words...the sand paper symbol has been cleverly employed there...pleasing poem...10

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