Thursday, August 23, 2018

Sand Or Water? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was enjoying my time on the beach, reminiscing:
If my position would be marked on a world map
Not a person on earth would be able to see
Whether my feet were in the water or in the sand
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Aufie Zophy
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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2018

The occurring of many thoughts in enjoying beach have been fantastically delineated in this poem. I appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing.10

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