Sand In My Toes Comments

Love it. It's been a while since I was at the beach. This made me feel like I was there. Thanks.

Excellent melodious poem. I read this poem more & more. I enjoyed it. Great ink! Thank you so much dearest poet Beach Girl. May ALLAH bless you. Be well always.

‘Tis true, ’ tis true, the pacific is cold. This does locate you, so now we know where that beach is. Read mine - Mother Dear - Adeline

a delectable kind of piece and pleasant lines

I have no fear of shark attack, what I hate about the beach, is sand in my crack! Love your fast wit in beautiful brevity

This is wonderful, it conveys the experience of being on the beach with both the highs and the lows. I haven't been to a beach in ages (we don't have much of that where I live) so this was like a vacation for me. ^^

thanks for the rhyming. thanks for sharing. i saw you, i think: She searched for her beach towel, her bandeau loose in her hand. With binoculars well-focused, I missed her toes coated with sand. :)

Beutifulful and pretty poem! I love this poem!

Love this poem.... Beach girl :)

well it is 55-58 degrees year round in these waters. i am also a beach lover. lots of good surfin' here. nice poem

A combination of heat and cold, a nice and beautiful write. It can truly fill one with zest.

beautiful poem, the flow and rhyming are good too really enjoyed to read it

This is a very nice poem.It is very melodious and flows freely. I also liked the idea. Thanks for the write. Also, I invite you to read and comment.

beautiful poetry.flow and rhyming is nice.liked it.

Nice work....Sand In My Toes....touch my feet so i can feel i am a part of nature, when the water from ocean call them i back to nothingness...just memories left..along the shore_Soul

Ran to the water Got outta the heat... lovley expression...10

A nice beach experience. Was it that cold?

white sugary sand pasted in snow coated toes sparkle in sunlight washed in white frothy waves - I like your style

Sweet. I love it too.

a good beach poem nice to have the sand between your toes 85433