Monday, August 18, 2008

Sand In My Hand Comments

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As if I'm trying
To hold
Sand in my hand
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Anjali Mandokhot
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Reshma Ramesh 23 November 2008

nice thought provoking poem..........well penned

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Al Ramos 22 September 2008

If you could build a foundation with the loose sand then all would not be lost.

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Serenity Prayer 18 August 2008

very creative. great job! i love how you used sand in my hand. great job!

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Viola Grey 18 August 2008

wonderful image you hve raised here...so much of life really is like sand slipping through our hands...great work

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