Tuesday, July 10, 2018

Sand Dust Of Ocean Comments

Rating: 4.0

we all are simply
part of sand-dunes
from the deserts of life
the wind carries us to the sea
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COMMENTS
Carl Roussell 28 August 2018

L like the analogy in this poem; we are all but sand grains. A 10.

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Red Soul 11 July 2018

A wonderfully crafted poem. I loved how you took the idea of humans being like sand and expanded on it to form a poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 11 July 2018

Loved your thoughts so nicely penned, a nice poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 July 2018

PL READ THE NEXT ONE Y WILL LAUGH

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 July 2018

THANKS SO MUCHLEEEEEE SIR JIIIIIIII

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 July 2018

Such an excellent write....10+++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 July 2018

KINDNESS THANKS 10 ++++++++++++++ WOW

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