Friday, August 22, 2008

Sand Castles Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Girls
Playing
In the sand
Building castles
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Kim Schilling
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Ahmad Shiddiqi 31 August 2008

lovely! I like the words, To take them far away, From their pain and suffering, Left unseen behind their small smiles. keep writing! could you read and comment on my new poems too? thank you.

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Kadelia Achille 24 August 2008

I love the way you used the format to build on what your poem was about. Great write!

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Kris Smith 22 August 2008

Nice poem enjoyed the message in it thanks Chris 10

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Kim Schilling

Kim Schilling

Illinois
Kim Schilling
Kim Schilling
Illinois
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