Monday, August 4, 2008

'Sand Castles' Comments

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I've been working on our castles',
Made of white sands upon the beach.
But every time I get one done,
They wash away by the oceans reach.
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Linda Winchell
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Stacey Watts 19 October 2008

What a beautiful poem. I loved it and the beach is such a wonderful place to build sancastles. You did a remarkable job on this poem.

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Howard Johnson 04 August 2008

Well written, Linda, I could feel the sand in my toes,

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Linda Winchell

Linda Winchell

Chicago Illinois
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