Friday, May 29, 2020

Sand Castles Comments

Rating: 5.0

Their boisterous cheers make our hearts sing for joy. Even their beautiful tears will tear down Heaven's door.
Blessed are we with their flawless smiles, no grudge in their innocent hearts.
Delicate and naive hands toil and soil in the mud. With sheer industry they build sand castles like the Eiffel tower. Priceless pears bestowed upon us by Mother Nature.
Beautiful voices in a symphony, they chant under the blue sky. In euphoria they bask under the cover of the ageless sun, they bathe in ecstasy as the sky shed tear drops.
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Shaun Cronick 01 June 2020

I was in the neighbourhood Uche and gave your fine poem another 10. Take care good sir and thanks again

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Uche Nwanze 01 June 2020

Thank you Sir for your kind words and support

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Shaun Cronick 31 May 2020

Great poem Uche so well written and so beautifully presented. A thought provoking and powerful message to make any reader stop and think, and hopefully choose to make a difference in life by helping needy and desperate others. 10++ and added to my I do choose give a favourites. Take care good Uche and may God Bless and Keep you sir.

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Uche Nwanze 30 May 2020

Thanks for your candid comments.

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Uche Nwanze

Uche Nwanze

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