Prabhat Kumar Sahoo

Prabhat Kumar Sahoo

316, Baramunda, Bhubaneswar-751003, Odisha, India
Thursday, April 27, 2017

Sand Castle And Little Squaw Comments

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Like the autumnal full moon
Her sweet remembrances,
Those bygone agile days
Still peer into my mind sky.
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Prabhat Kumar Sahoo
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Denis Mair 02 September 2017

Though built upon the tide of time, your shrine hands down a divine spark that flared in this world. Though built of ephemeral materials, your shrine is repaired by devoted visits. The word SQUAW is well-used, for in moments of communion, two children were living in the lap of Nature. I like the CLAP which summons a receptive child to that alternate realm. Sometimes a detail calls us back. I remember myself and a neighbor girl pulling a toy wagon with a doll in it. We were journeying to a new dwelling place.

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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 03 September 2017

My dear Poet, your comments with your experience bears much value to me.So nice of you.

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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 30 April 2017

Whether any of you search your little squaw any more ? For them, I gift these lines.Please do write me .

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Prabhat Kumar Sahoo

Prabhat Kumar Sahoo

316, Baramunda, Bhubaneswar-751003, Odisha, India
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