Sand And Water Comments

A poignant rendition written in heightened poetic diction with conviction. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Gillena.

I like the poem with its secrets in ocean, thanks.

oceans, shores are beautiful subjects for poetry and here the poet wrtten a good poem.

I like this poem and I learnt a new word today (quotidian) . I feel it would have been more touching had the words been fitted into a rhythmic pattern.

nice writing goodness words Gillena Cox mam

Not bad, maybe a little too literary, heavy with vocabulary...

well sketched... great words

Thank you Gillena for sharing such a lovely poem. I will definitely continue to read more of your 'pieces!

Just beautifully put... bravo and congratulations on read of the day...karen

Very nice wording a job well done

Bursting with beauty. Thanks for sharing.

very nice write ...............

It is a beautiful poem of description, Gillena.

Each beakful, each morsel, A hunter’s bounty received to honour a life, a wonderful write dear......10++ definitely although sand and water are enemies of each other.

nice abstract, descriptive poem, lovely to read...........10+++++

Great flow of words with great crafting of imagery and figurative language...........10

Sand and water, the tale of life within life, a great creation.

Watching ocean from shoreline is like watching erosion of time from its eternal flow. Water and sand both are metaphors of life and its evulationary rituals in this very meaningful poem. Great write, Gillena. Thanks for sharing..........10/10. Regards Naseer

A hunter’s bounty received to honour a life, Of existence, and of predestined creation; Continuing in abeyance, a ritual union of creator, ....ina sense it is ritual union of creator and all depends on cycle only....10 read mine exploitation...miss i miss u and why do we neglect the nature

The seashore solves many problems