Sand Comments

The desert is magic, it's life, it's death. Wonderful poem!

A beautiful poem, describing the infertility of a 'barren' life. 'Waves are perceived regularly without any sign of blossom. As the bareness of sand makes it a silent graveyard, the bareness of my life makes me to sleep day and night in a grave. I live within sand, sand lives within me.' - Loved these lines and the imagery they portray.

A poignant poem. Beautifully crafted with great imagery.