Wednesday, September 27, 2006

Sanctuary, Solace (Tactile Explorations) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Kisses, more than sublime
Give me life
Give me light that shines
Now give me all that we are
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Raymond J Wright
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Gillian Prew 12 August 2007

You said my poem was a piece of beauty: this is that beauty reflected right here. How sensually you evoke what it is like to be in love.

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Patricia Gale 09 April 2007

Like savoring sweet wine, love so deeply expressed.

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Lori Boulard 17 October 2006

Is it hot in here? 'Fresh linen, cool breezes' 'coldness' and 'raging fires' are stirring images that really hit home. I'm a stickler for grammar, so take out that apostrophe in 'it's' and this is golden. So glad I found your poems! Cheers, Lori

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R H 13 October 2006

A wonderful expression of love, beautifully written Ray. Justine

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Francesca Johnson 01 October 2006

The title grabbed my attention - it sounds so peaceful. The poem is tasteful and lovely, Ray, and the last line just says it all. Love, Fran xx

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Michael Gale 27 September 2006

Great poem of passionat love. Had ta giv 'er a ten. God bless all poets-MJG.

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