Kisses, more than sublime
Give me life
Give me light that shines
Now give me all that we are
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Is it hot in here? 'Fresh linen, cool breezes' 'coldness' and 'raging fires' are stirring images that really hit home. I'm a stickler for grammar, so take out that apostrophe in 'it's' and this is golden. So glad I found your poems! Cheers, Lori
The title grabbed my attention - it sounds so peaceful. The poem is tasteful and lovely, Ray, and the last line just says it all. Love, Fran xx
Great poem of passionat love. Had ta giv 'er a ten. God bless all poets-MJG.
You said my poem was a piece of beauty: this is that beauty reflected right here. How sensually you evoke what it is like to be in love.