Tuesday, February 22, 2005

Sanctuary Comments

Rating: 4.0

In my place I'm meant to scream, fear, shed a tear
In my place I sit and wonder
What happens in my head I ponder
Endless whispers in my ear
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Matthew Hyatt
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Kim McInnis 06 March 2005

Again, a little meh. I do like how you use repetition in this piece, though. Really emphasizes your point. Not bad.

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