Thursday, February 26, 2009

Sanctuary Comments

Rating: 5.0

Freedom will twitch as trigger
Proclaiming pain of happiness
And only thousands of my lines
Will not colonize on my hands...
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Catrina Heart 08 March 2009

Unique context with a common theme, stunning composition woven with fine poetic language.........10

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Sid John Gardner. 08 March 2009

Keep going mate.The more you have contact with Native English speakers so willyour grasp of the language progress.Best of luck to you. Duss Vadanya Tavarish... Sid.

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