Monday, April 10, 2017

Sanctuarium Comments

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Let me chance upon a well-hidden nook
Where my thoughts can assemble in peace,
There I shall scribble in my poetry book
Words and verses moaning for release;
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 16 April 2017

BUT..... what the Hell does Santuarium mean?

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Bri Edwards 16 April 2017

I love all the lines, especially the last couplet; that means 2 lines, right? :) And you're tempting me to attempt this fascinating rhyme scheme which, of course, you sailed through breathlessly. I'm tempted, but probably too lazy or forgetful to do it. One for MyPoemList and perhaps a future showcase. Bravo! bri :) I hope your veins were ready for my praise!

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