Sanctity In Coma Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Sanctity In Coma

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The world outside continues to spin,
with hate speech, killing and bullying
but humanity in coma knows nothing about,
there's a new world within the greed of power,
a world of reflection, and inner discovery,
where one can find solace, in pure simplicity.

Some may see it as a state of despair,
but in this coma, there's a beauty to share,
for in this stillness, there's a sacredness found,
where souls can heal, and hearts can rebound.

Where is that body at rest, with steady breath,
and mind in slumber, no thoughts to beget,
and stillness with calmness, like a holy shrine,
and those sacred moment, so pure and divine?

Sanctity in coma, a peaceful repose,
a dreamlike state, where the soul decomposes,
where worries and fears, they all disappear,
and tranquility reigns, ever so clear.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Jack 24 March 2024

This one is a very good poem showing mirror to the society.

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Nabakishore Dash 24 March 2024

I liked the stanza at the end. Excellent piece.

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