Sunday, November 27, 2005

San Jose Comments

Rating: 5.0

The ruts of the calle ran through the breast
tear through the canopy on one side
of the copper and red mud road
Serpentine down the muck of puddle and gulley
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George Murdock
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Max Reif 10 December 2005

extremely vivid picture, George, an 'allusion' to paradise, but that is as close as it gets.

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