*samsara Comments

Wonderful poem. Profound in drawing the inexplicable analogy betwixt a game of Golf and the ties of the worldly woes (janmasamsaara bandhanam) .

I just laughed at this and thank you for writing what sounds true enough to be very funny.

The first moves onwards happily and in a mood of victory and the second follows only in compulsion to earn his livelihood...

You, sir really have read the Buddish Bible.

Some wry comedey here very well said. That millionaire has lost his balls in the woods! regards

The poor sinner caddy too crawls towards him with a heavy bag that full of debts on his oblique shoulder.................................. it is endless journey we have to take on without anybody's help. lovely poem with good message....10 read mine sir....special prayers..... spare us

The pathetic contradictions in life so wonderfully poeticised...

Who can explore nature's destiny....samsara remains still unanswerable...thank you

Interesting take on what Twain called 'a good walk spoiled.' Terse and thought-provoking.

Your comment on the different levels of society is especially telling because you do not tell us what to think - you simply draw a picture and let us draw our own conclusions.

A very sharp comment on the world as we know it. - Will

You take an ordinary incident and imbue it with great spiritual and social significance. The vase you share is humbly thrown. The wisdom of its fine glaze is profound. Another fabulous poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Beautiful contrast and well put together. When I first saw the title I thought 'what has this to do with golf? ' but I quickly realised. Excellent piece.10

The contrast between those who have and those who have not so often defined by you in your compelling pieces. This one is an excellent example of your creative skill to sketch these two eternally opposing pictures of life. The reader is left to ponder why this must be so.Perhaps, there is no answer... Warm regards, Sandra