Friday, February 20, 2009

Samsara Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nailed to thee cross ov love
Embittered amid thee scenes
With unfathomable form ov how
see dying bride by any means
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Amir Foroughi
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Unnikrishnan E S 01 July 2021

A deep melancholy poem. Skilfully written by a talented poet. Full scores

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Unwritten Soul 02 October 2011

The bell was ringing, the sad was clinging..it really tearful story..So now i understand why you have live in much sorrow...but will you still feel it morrow? You cry with blood and it cramped your marrow, we hare have nothing to give you or to let you borrow...but we here only can told you tomorrow should be happier and how you can always be happy if the sad you always bold? ? Memories will stay forevermore...pain or sweet it good it still exist in mind my dear friend...it written in everyone with different story line..So the left time that we still have here in earth, let just breathe find some happy while let our memories stay together...We look for better days not worst day right..Think my friend_Unwritten Soul

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 16 June 2009

Very powerfully written poem. Melancholic

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