Tuesday, March 7, 2017

Samjhauta Comments

Rating: 5.0

tumhara yun pal bhar me badal jana
aaj yaad karke kal bhul jana
dekh ke mujhe yun andekha kr jana
raas nahi aata ab tera mujhse yun rooth jana..
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KAVITA SINGH
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Jazib Kamalvi 14 March 2017

Faraz ne khoob kaha tha. Yun hi mosam ki ada dekh ke yaad aaya hai, kis qadar jald badal jate hain insan jana. Thanks.

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Kavita Singh 15 March 2017

badalna to dastur hai....kavi duniya badali hai kavi log.thankx sir

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Saadat Tahir 10 March 2017

a lovely romantic poem written in the classical Indian rather eastern form fluid and charming liked

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Kavita Singh 10 March 2017

thank you for lovely comment sir

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 March 2017

Hi Kavita, Beautifully rendered, the deep feelings of love and loss. When the lover has left her life, she is resigned to her fate: mat aao ab khawabon me tum ki nindon se bagawat kr li hai maine But she has regained confidence: teri yaadon ki tijori se jeene ki kuchh ummid chura li hai maine.. And, tujhe pane ki hasrat nhi rahi ab bas tujhme khona hai mujhe tere saath gujre yaadon ke sagar me lahron ki tarah bahna hai mujhe... Deeply touching one's heart. Perfect 10+++

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Gajanan Mishra 07 March 2017

Khonaa aur paana, ye duniyaa..

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