Sunday, November 11, 2007

Same Time Next Year Comments

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I'd sent it to you, longhand mostly,
forgetting that you would prefer
the English version, blow me down,
had spent a week to translate all
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Allan James Saywell 11 November 2007

You can write the shorter poem and have just as much word power i sense your gazing into past love, dwell for a while then continue your poetic journey AWSOME

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Ted Sheridan 11 November 2007

Love the way you rhyme. I draw a blank when I try.

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