I wanted you to know
That I had loved you so
I have told you once,
Twice or trice
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Lovely romanticism in a modern version. Gosh at 16 vs.33 and then 26 as against 43. It's not too early and too late if we speak in ratio. As the saying goes, age doesn't matter. But I guess this man has ears but cannot hear, he has eyes but cannot see. Would you say love is blind? I'm generous today, I give you 10 for this. Keep the change, Cathy?
your proceed your love............ smile! smile! ! smile! ! ! ........ the loveliest angle living in the heart alive......... rajenath
This came from the heart Very touching and warm... The flow of words are excellent But I felt a line in the first stanza... Should of been different... This was written with love So you get top marks... Keep expressing Keep pouring your love on P.H Thank you very much For being inspirational Cheers
Such honest and tender writing Catrina where your heart knows how you really feel, but perhaps your head reasons in another way. I love the way you poem is positioned within the stanzas and the romance this poem evokes. 10 love Karin
Though meeting after a decade, the feelings of the heart has not changed! A lovely short story in verse! - Raj
Love cannot change Catrina - - and this proves the point - - a tender verse - - - 10 + ++ Fay
Catrina this is such a poignant piece beautifully written, could not help but shed a tear....10++++++
Some things in life will never change, feelings we hold will ever remain so dear 10 Daniel
Catrina very beautifully written. I always praise your poems. Make the poem dedicated tome dear poet.......10++
lovely write cheryl very moving actually this happened to me lol 10 my poetress
Love is a feeling, not a decision. You can't choose who you love. If you could, it would be much simpler, but less magical.
here it is..now this is so beautiful and straight from the heart.A write that I can also relate to. this is a far cry from your other beautiful writes.I just love and adore this.Wonderful