Sunday, February 26, 2006

Samantha Comments

Rating: 5.0

Samantha, walking through the woods, beset by bears.
I, forty yards behind, remembered an appointment and retired –
It was not my affair!
But, on second thoughts, having on hand
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Kathy Van Kurin 30 November 2016

Tan Pratonix, Yea! The difference between dreams and reality is shown delightfully in this really fun poem. I am enthralled by your use of descriptive elements between what is in the mind of the hunter and the girl he would save. Blessings, kathy

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glen still 26 February 2006

Man...i am mesmerized by your words...the far thought process u had to endure...if this came like a oneliner...i'd say...u have my ear...let me learn from u bro! gcs again b@peace

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