'Salvoni' Comments
A cute little girl, not a doll, a beautiful angel
I brought from a distant city, a gift for my daughter
'Salvoni', she called it and took care of it dedicatedly
Who soon became a bit of the heart of my heart's bit
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I don't know if it is a fictitious story! However it contains a touching message. We should not punish children in a fit of anger without proper understanding of the situation. If they are punished unncessarily, it will leave a deep scar in them which time may not be able to heal. The narration is done in a very touching manner! A sure 10
Thank you dear Valsa George. It is an excerpt from life. The incident has created a deep wound in me rather than in my child.
An incident which could be considered to have little importance is pictured here with much grace.
A cute little girl! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
hard decision on good decision may conflict......a hard reality expressed so significantly
Thank you very much good friend for sending the first comments appraising my hard decisions.
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7/28/2025 1:13:31 PM # 1.0.0
Nice poem. Children can only be understood if we visit their worlds. Brought a tear to my eye.
Yes, dear Bindu it is that fear tempted me to punish. Thank you