Monday, November 17, 2008

Salvation Is In My Heart Comments

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Salvation is in my Heart
Oh, the warriors of my heart
They work without order
without command, Always!
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Nikki Clevenger
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John Weber 19 November 2008

This poem shines as a unashamed declaration of self! Nikki, I doubt there's much you could add to this to make this better; empowerment rings true here! Warm regards, John.

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Blue Eyes 18 November 2008

this is a nice poem well constructed and brilliantly penned.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 November 2008

enlighted inner vision.......finely penned.....10+

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