Salvation Ii Comments

Song of pain ---good poem expressing the mind

I wander aimlessly towards each day Waiting for a sign of optimism By the end, they are dashed Without word And I weep for G-d to answer But He is the only one to know it----When all hope dashed, we turn to God only.

A deeply poignant poem. Well crafted and conveyed.

.....a sign of optimism.....magnificent..

This poem paints a realistic portrayal of despair, with eloquent words and vivid imagery. So well done!

Sometimes the silence drains our resolve. This is a terrific verse, LeeAnn.

An excellent poem is shared here...5 stars