Salvation Comments
When my suffering is unending
how can you attain salvation
What if i escape this birth
and never meet you again
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'and yet my unfinished love kept writing poems in order to wear away my pain ' these lines are my favorite, thats the why i write to...i love ur poem its full of emotion...its like i fell what ur telling ur readers
Nice poem. It so in depth with your thoughts and its cool keep writing.
From : Ahmed Khaled (Syrian Arab Republic ;) To : Vivek Haldar Date Time : 9/7/2011 12: 44: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : you've got promising poetry yes dear vivek, your colours are vivid and your words are clean, as clean as a beautiful flower lived in india thousands years..go on..you do well
A wonderful work, a great feel in every lines..good use of words..10 for you poet...
From : Chris Cariad (Paducah, Ky United States; Male; 22) To : Vivek Haldar Date Time : 9/7/2011 12: 42: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: Hi Thank you, What a great poem it was! looking forward to reading more in the future! I do hope you as well enjoy mine!
I am a simple soul who understands not metaphor or simile but does feel your heartfelt feelings. Deep work. Regards. Craig.
I appreciate the passion of your verse...Peace! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Wow! a very deep and meaningful one. It shows the depth of your thoughts.. all the best and do keep writing!
Salvation lies within...wonderful job with sweet alliteration of words and usage of similes and paraphrases and extended metaphors..Well done
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7/23/2025 10:26:36 PM # 1.0.0
Salvation has been artistically communicated here. Great work of art!