Wednesday, July 6, 2011

Salvation Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I was feeling blue
I only have to look into those innocent eyes
Then, dissolved all the troubled inside
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Adisty Mulianty
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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