Monday, December 7, 2015

Salvation Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let me break into thousand pieces
turn into the dust I was formed
mingle with rain and earth
and dissolve into nothingness.
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Mohammad Ashek Shaahid
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Nice to read, Feels like had a piece bread, nice to sing, feels like guiter swings. Nice poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 January 2017

From my atom! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bakuli Bhakali 07 December 2015

thoughtful... gave 10

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Rajnish Manga 07 December 2015

Thanks for sharing this wonderful philosophical poem. To disintegrate and to merge and dissolve into nothingness 'For I wish to rise from my atom into eternity. Thoughtful articulation.

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Unwritten Soul 07 December 2015

Really, i am into this beautiful poem....your creativity made the poem look wonderful..very nice!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 December 2015

Let me fall like a leaf for eternity and let me feel life's eternal consciousness. Very interesting spiritual poem shared definitely. Wisely penned poem shared.10

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