Wednesday, August 22, 2018

Salvation Comments

Rating: 5.0

SALVATION
PoemBy DPN

How long have I been waiting for you here on this threshold
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 November 2021

Beautiful poetic expression! Very touching and heartfelt lines. The ultimate stanza is stunning. To my Poem List.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 February 2021

My heart is dancing to the tune of that music in extreme ecstasies....delightful expression! A lovely poem sir.....top score.

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Date & Time: 7/3/2020 5: 39: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 53109118 - Salvation Member: Bharati NayakComment: Like the drop of water that rolls downstream to join the sea afar My soul has been in incessant journey to reach thy blissful realms My thirst for dissolving in you is formidable, greet this little drop too Into thy tranquil sea of sacred truth, eternal peace and sublime beauty - - - - - - -Beautiful poem.

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Comment: Like the drop of water that rolls downstream to join the sea afar My soul has been in incessant journey to reach thy blissful realms My thirst for dissolving in you is formidable, greet this little drop too Into thy tranquil sea of sacred truth, eternal peace and sublime beauty - - - - - - -Beautiful poem.

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Bharati Nayak 03 July 2020

Like the drop of water that rolls downstream to join the sea afar My soul has been in incessant journey to reach thy blissful realms My thirst for dissolving in you is formidable, greet this little drop too Into thy tranquil sea of sacred truth, eternal peace and sublime beauty - - - - - - -Beautiful poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 May 2020

The sound of your steps is vibrating my strings playing melodies My heart is dancing to the tune of that music in extreme ecstasies Come, grant me the boon I have been longing for in all my births. pour into this bowl., . i imagine that you stand there smiling and asking pour into this bowl. wonderful poem my dear poet Parameswaran. thank you, tony

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Thank you very much dear Dr. Tony for the delightful appreciation of the poem. At times I feelo like conversationg with God Omnipresent

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 March 2020

Like the drop of water that rolls downstream to join the sea afar My soul has been in incessant journey to reach thy blissful realms.. sooooo fine dear parmeswaran Nair, you end up with God and God's Peace. lovely. tony

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Thanking you I must say that such words of appreciation really give me real inspiration and confidence. The union of JEEVATMA and PARAMATMA is blissful..

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Reetha Antony 10 September 2019

Nice poem

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Thank you Reetha Antony

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2019

On this threshold! ! ! ! ! Salvation. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you very much Edward for the comments

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Nice poem.The desire to attain moksha is evident. Death is not the ultimate solution to moksha. well written and fine presentation.

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Thank you Balu for the comments

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Jayachandran C Nair; 10 December 2018

Presentation coherently is stupendous

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Thank you Jayachandran for the comments

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Thank you Jayachandran for the commrnts

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 November 2018

My thirst for dissolving in you is formidable, greet this little drop too Into thytranquil sea of sacred truth, eternal peace and sublime beauty..... yes these lines are the epitome of what you wrote. this is my wish also dear Parameswaran. we all want to dissolve in God the one who loves us without any reservation even when we are sinners. thank u always for this poem. i shall take into my collection of poems. tony

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Thank you Dr. Tony. Our immense thirst for attaining Nirvana (salvation) is mounting up day by day. The moment we can dissolve ourselves in the tranquil sea of the ultimate truth will be the most beautiful one

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sreekumar 19 November 2018

well said sacred truth, eternal peace andsublime beauty

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Parameswaran Nair (DPN) 19 November 2018

Thank you Sreekumar for your kind comments

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Jackson Gomez 15 November 2018

very nice poem sir....

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Thank you jack. Read the other ones too

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 November 2018

The sound of your steps is vibrating my strings playing melodies My heart is dancing to the tune of that music in extreme ecstasies Come, grant me the boon I have been longing for in all my births Pour into this bowl I hold before thee a drop of bliss fromthy heavens......dear poet Parmeswaran, , , , , , , , , yours is a great soul longing for the salvation, final freedom from the earth to the heavens into the abode of God. love your poems. tony

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Thank you Dr. Tony Brahmin. Salvation is the boon a human being can ultimately aspire, thank you bro.

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Ramadas 10 November 2018

The poet goes eloquent on his long cherished dream for joining the infinity.where etrenal peace, sacred truth and sublime beauty prevails. It is anybody's desire and hope but DPN presents it with beautiful imageries. Good pem.

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Parameswaran Nair (DPN) 10 November 2018

Thank you Ramadas for the elating comments

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Leela kumari R 26 October 2018

Poet is searching for eternal peace and glory- His sincere thirst for it draws the reader to another world. The images used are great!

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Thank you Leela Kumari. Ordinary beings like us, sometimes may not be able to attain eternal peace. For them death is the only source. Thank you sis

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Prabha 30 September 2018

Beautiful

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Thank you Prabha. Kindly rate and vote the poems

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Robyn 29 September 2018

This is a beautiful, passionate poem.

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Thank you Robyn. Please read my other poems too

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Reetha Antony 28 September 2018

Om shanthi...shanthi...shanthi.

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Thank you Reetha. Let Peace prevail

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Thank you Reetha. Let peace be our goal

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