Salvation... Comments

Great poem! Lovers meet and then become separated.

Oh I do love this It reads easily and it is nice to see that in poems as it is so rare to see. Thanks for the recomend -EP

haaaaaaaaa this is beautifulllll rhyming as i read and so easy and simple words you used... very easy to understand at the first sight.....marvelous. you have a rare ability to write clearly without ambiguity..... this is an ability. so many young poets think that using words that are not simple help them to give an impression that poem is something special. it is not true.. thank you for clarity and simplicity.. thank you dear poet, tony

Reminds me of the song SALVATION popularized by MICHAEL LEARNS TO ROCK... Rated 10++++ You may visit my TAKE TIME TO THINK and DON'T BLOCK THE DRIVE WAY...

So many shades. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks