Wednesday, January 13, 2016

Salty Sea Breeze - Tanka Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rounding the bend
Of a sine curved sealink
Assault salty breeze
cul de sac freed
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Seema Jayaraman
sea
COMMENTS
Edward Kofi Louis 14 January 2016

But, we need salt. Nice work.

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Seema Jayaraman 14 January 2016

Yes that's true Edward, what is life without salt..

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M Asim Nehal 13 January 2016

Superb poem...............I liked it, thanks for sharing 10+++++

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Seema Jayaraman 14 January 2016

Thank you Nehal, happy you enjoyed

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