Tuesday, January 12, 2016

Salted Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the rain finally falls
Petals will not remain closed
Metal will melt unto droplets
As rivers run unhindered
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PHUMLA KHANYILE
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Teenage Mawuto 22 January 2016

10 out of a 10 for this rain poem

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A rich and refreshing river that is bursting with beauty! Well done my friend! 10/10

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PHUMLA KHANYILE

PHUMLA KHANYILE

south africa
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