Its dessert of salt
Rains mostly in night
And rarely in light
Has day and night
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Playing around and repetition of words, beauty of tears and wonderful theme.
this poem is fantastic.. it get you, something again it.. i like it.
from the weep of the night there came a light to the heart, brought joys now the tears alike salt are sweet................... the essence of real happiness is being brought about after all the dark nights....10+++
I like it a lot theres something that draws me in, it's really sweet.
Poetic as always great flow good work