Tuesday, March 17, 2009

Salt Is Sweet Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its dessert of salt
Rains mostly in night
And rarely in light
Has day and night
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Eyan Desir 21 March 2009

Poetic as always great flow good work

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 19 March 2009

Playing around and repetition of words, beauty of tears and wonderful theme.

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Joseph Poewhit 18 March 2009

Interesting play with words.

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Pablo Cruise 18 March 2009

Your play with the rhyme is intriguing

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this poem is fantastic.. it get you, something again it.. i like it.

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Catrina Heart 17 March 2009

from the weep of the night there came a light to the heart, brought joys now the tears alike salt are sweet................... the essence of real happiness is being brought about after all the dark nights....10+++

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Janell Cressman 17 March 2009

I like it a lot theres something that draws me in, it's really sweet.

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