Thursday, July 11, 2013

Salt And Pepper Shaker Comments

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Salt and pepper shaker,
Talk to me a lot,
Whether the customer,
Advice sought.
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Vera Sidhwa
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Bri Edwards 16 November 2017

yes, the 'shakers' can SPILL a lot of information/advice! i like the rhyming and that you ended as you did, without a rhyme. nice. Howard mentions mundane, below. well..... shakers are mundane, but TALKING shakers are NOT! CUTE. to MyPoemList. bri ;)

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Bringing meaning out of the mundane is indeed a wonderful way to create poetry.

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Dave Walker 11 July 2013

Like it. Just think if the salt and pepper pots could talk, The things they could tell you. A great poem.

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