Salmon Ella Comments

Very cute. I can't do puns, but you seem to have pulled it off with decent style

Rachael I think this poem is very funny you are on a par with Dennis lee and his Bloody Bill. Keep up the good work. John

Rachael, your wit really showed on this piece. A fine tuned bit of writing that netted me in. I loved the fast flow and refused to swim up stream. Big 10 and thanks for sharing it. David

rachael, such clever wit... :) x

Rachael, you're a dab hand at the poetising This was fillet with choice rhymes. You don't skate over the essentials either. My fate was sealed when you gilled me with the nocturnal fishing - as I'm not in the halibut of angling under the moon. All in all a very tasty piece of whiting. (Well - you used all the good ones! !) xx jim